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Pitching a Tent, Welcoming
a Traveler, and Moving On:
Toward A Nomadic View of the Writing Center
by Jeffry C. Davis, Wheaton College
To travel hopefully
is a better thing than to arrive,
and the true success is to labour.
from El Dorado, by Robert Louis Stevenson
I
was traveling across campus to my office when an administrator, going in the
opposite direction, paused long enough to offer a greeting, pose a question,
and present a surprising tidbit of news. Are you ready to move?,
he asked with a grin. I must have looked somewhat bewildered, so he continued
on, You probably know that weve already started to implement the
Colleges five initiatives for the New Century Challenge. I shook
my head affirmatively, aware that the initiatives he referred to were part
of a fundraising campaign to enhance Wheaton Colleges educational effectiveness
with regard to faculty, technology, library services, community, and student
life. The plan at this point is to link the writing center with the
new computer research and instructional center, he went on. That
means that you will be moving from the basement of the library to the first
floor, near the main entrance. Rushing on to a meeting, he shouted that
he would get back to me to clarify the details, and he assured me that the
move wouldnt happen until sometime during the semester break. I thanked
him for the good news, began walking again, and then thought to myself, The
semester break?
Quickly
I became overwhelmed by concurrent feelings of elation and anxiety. On the
one hand, I did write a proposal requesting that the administration
consider my ideas on how a new writing center could promote the New Century
Challenge initiatives. Obviously they had reviewed my proposal and were ready
to act on it. So, I couldnt help but be pleased. Yet on the other hand,
it seemed that I had recently finished the arduous task of getting the writing
center up and running again after moving it from its previous quarters on
the second floor of a building halfway across campus. The thought of packing
up books, computers, equipment, and supplies, only to unpack them again and
set up a new site, led me to view myself, my tutors, our work, and the writing
center as downright nomadic.
As
I continued the walk to my office, I recounted momentous events from our nomadic
existence. My predecessor, now the chair of English and my boss, first put
things in motion thirteen years ago with the help of a one-time grant. The
early days were not easy: a case for institutional support had to be made
and won, tutors had to be hired and given basic training, and some sort of
space had to be found for our regular use. Wheatons center, like so
many writing centers that start up at small liberal arts colleges, began on
a meager budget in an unused classroom, where unseasoned tutors met with guinea-pig
student writers during limited evening hours.
After
our center became established, the main administrative building on campus
underwent renovation, resulting in a spare office; it was offered to us for
exclusive writing center use. Cramped but functional, the office became home,
a place where tutors didnt have to box everything up at the end of each
long night, as they did in the classroom. And given its strategic locationnear
the main computer labwe happily siphoned off a fair amount of daily,
overflow business, which increased our numbers and lengthened our hours. We
also purchased a computer and hooked up a printer, going from handwritten
record keeping to an electronic database. My staff and I camped there comfortably,
working contentedly and welcoming visitors to our congenial surroundings.
Regularly we received compliments for the shaded blue lamps and the Monet
reproductions on the walls, which had a calming effect on students. It was
an easy place to tutor, and to learn, and to grow. But then, after several
semesters, we were unexpectedly asked to move on to another area. Our space
was needed for a new administrative office.
With
the promise of a larger site to pitch our tent, we trekked across campus to
our present location, the lower level of the library. It was a secluded place,
and less visible and accessible to students, but it proved to be almost three
times bigger. To enhance our new locale, we asked the College to outfit us
with four additional computers (for student use), another printer, some furniture
(including a sizable bookshelf and a comfortable chair), and some plants.
We got what we asked for. Word got around about our new and improved
writing center, and students came in greater numbers than before. All that
took place less than three years ago.
Now,
once again, the writing center needed to move, and I needed to start making
plans to travel. As I arrived back at my office, in checklist fashion my mind
was reviewing the sorts of things that I would soon have to do. Then, while
reaching for the keys to open my door, something dawned on me: my reflections
on the writing centers nomadic existence had greater significance than
I first realized. What, I wondered, are some of the theoretical
implications of a nomadic writing center? Sitting at my desk, I let
my thoughts wander from my head to the page in front of me.
One of my perennial challengesas is the case for most directorsinvolves communicating to students, faculty, and administrators what the writing center is, and what it does. Many misperceptions abound. Consequently, I sometimes have struggled to know where to begin in providing an accurate explanation to others. Bonnie S. Sunstein offers helpful insight, here, recognizing that there is an inherent difficulty in coming up with a stable definition for writing center:
Writing centers exist in an often uncertain presentbut they work with a past brought in by writers thinking about a future. For years, writing center staffs have tried to define our place to ourselves, our administrators, and to our profession. Weve attempted to create a definition that reflects our realitiesour struggles as well as our successeswhat weve been and what we may yet become. But definition eludes us. (7)
In my quandary to come up with a clear and honest definition, one thing I have come to believe is that a writing center must not be understood, first and foremost, as a place.
In
reality, what has defined the writing center at our college has not been an
area or region understood largely in spatial termsa center. As Sunstein
poignantly observes, A writing center cannot define itself as a spacewere
often kicked out of our spaces (8). Being kicked out of
an old space may not be all bad, as I have discovered at Wheaton, especially
if it is a kick in the right direction. Writing centers at colleges and universitiesrelatively
recent on the academic landscapetend to be unstable phenomena, spatially
speaking; they follow a sort of archetypal path, journeying from one location
to another, as they gain credibility and worth. For that reason, and others,
what best characterizes our writing center is not a placethough
place certainly has some significancebut praxis.
Praxis,
simply put, is theory put into action. Travel represents a nomadic
understanding of praxis. In one sense, travel can be understood as actual
physical movement, the common understanding of the word; but it can also represent
the intellectual process of attaining knowledge and consciously applying it
to particular skills, like writing, in order to extend those skills. Travel,
in this sense, rarely happens quickly, easily, or directly; yet, for the committed
traveler, it ultimately becomes a meaningful and gratifying activity.
Knowledge
is vital to travel. When students from diverse backgrounds and disciplinary
interests sojourn to our tent, we first welcome them to our ground,
briefly offering knowledge about our writing centers approach and methods.
Then we attempt to meet students on their own ground, asking questions
to help us get to know them a little better and to understand what they are
working on and how they think we might be able to help them. This preliminary
interchange of knowledge is essential if we are going to travel well together;
we have to know what to expect from each other. As tutors and writers speak
and listen to each other, paying attention to their respective realms of discourse,
they draw upon mutually disclosed knowledge. Often unpredictable and fascinating,
the interaction is never static. Travel depends upon collaborative, sincere,
energetic engagement.
With the forgoing views in mind, what, then, constitutes an honest description of our writing center? As the director of a writing center on the move, when I describe what our writing center is and what it does, I realize that I must attempt to represent the reality of tutors as they interact with writers. It starts with a fundamental narration. The actionthe plotwhich develops between these two peoplethe charactersmust lead somewhere, as in any good narrative. Usually, however, this somewhere is an unknown for both characters, who, though they may have a sense of purpose and direction, seldom are sure exactly where they will travel; this is because, in part, the tutoring session cannot be reduced to a rigid set of interpersonal rules, followed to calculated ends. There is no universal map that consistently guides every tutor and every student writer as they attempt to move forward. In light of this truth, Joan Hawthorne explains the importance of directive tutoring:
Writing center conferences are negotiated events between the student and the consultant. There is no right answer or best conference to use as a guide. If students leave the conference (a) with a slightly better paper, (b) as a slightly better writer, and (c) feeling comfortable with the center and likely to return so you can continue the work that was begun, youve had a good enough conference. (5)
Thus, the work of praxis
depends upon negotiation. The tutors trainingtheir theoretical
knowledge gained through workshops, weekly memos, meetings, and required readingsfinds
expression in dialog, often intuitively and spontaneously generated, during
the fleeting moments that make up a session.
Praxis
depends upon writing-center dialog, which transports both tutor and student
writer from one insight to another, leading to a clearer vision of the writers
work and, ultimately, to a sensible strategy for revision. Writing centers,
then, as Peter Carino states, are social as well as linguistic,
social in the sense of the praxis that goes on there, linguistic in the sense
that all of that praxis is mediated by language both as it occurs and in any
attempts we make to document it. As language, our documentation, our discourse,
is always already interpretive (32). Given that the language we use
interprets what we do, the best linguistic descriptor to convey the kind of
praxis that occurs in our writing center at Wheaton, naturally, is nomadic.
Travel not only typifies our past and our future, with regard to physical
movement from place to place, but it also characterizes the daily theoretical
application that results from tutor-writer interaction. Tutors and writers
are always coming and going, moving in a multitude of directionsbodily,
verbally, textually. A nomadic view of the writing center not only accounts
for this flux, but emphasizes that such actionsuch travelis central
to its identity and function.
Ironically,
our writing centers wandering in the wilderness has been due, in part,
to our successful praxis: students have sought us out to dialog and seek direction,
and we have grown. Despite the centers precarious presence during the
past decadepitching a tent in one place, only to take it down and pitch
it in anotherstudents have continued to wander, as nomads, across campus
to find us, coming in ever-increasing numbers. This is best illustrated by
the fact that last year we provided more than four times as many tutorials
as we did in our first year. The steadily increasing student influx has factored
into our need to be nomadic, moving to an ever more accommodating place of
praxisa larger tent.
In
thinking about students regular excursions to our tent, wherever it
has been pitched, I sense that in several ways they see Wheatons Writing
Center as sort of oasis in the midst of their own nomadic lives. From semester
to semester, they move from one set of courses to another, from one classroom
to the next, from one professor and disciplinary discourse to another, from
one writing assignment to the one after. Exciting as these academic endeavors
can be, they are rarely easy. As David Bartholomae argues, Since students
assume privilege by locating themselves [my emphasis], within the discourse
of a particular communitywithin a set of specifically acceptable gestures
and commonplaceslearning, at least as it is defined in the liberal arts
curriculum, becomes more a matter of imitation or parody than a matter of
invention and discovery (278). This nomadic activity of locating
oneself in discourse communities across the disciplines, of writing papers
using acceptable gestures and commonplacesa highly complex
kind of travelcan tire even the most seasoned of student travelers.
Thus, from time to time students long for a place where they can find refreshment
and encouragement for their academic journey.
When
a writing center serves as an oasis, it represents a safe environment where
students can temporarily stop off to discuss their writing, tell tales of
grief and triumph in learning, confide in another with their fears and frustrations,
and attain a clearer sense of their own process of composing. An oasis, as
it is commonly understood, functions as a refuge. In that sense, nomadic learners
regularly come to us wanting to pull up a chair, slow down for a while, and
share a bit of their written reflections with a fellow travelera tutor.
Sadly, this sort of dynamic exchange of talk, tales and text between travelers
happens too seldom.
Besides
being a refuge, a writing center that operates as an oasis becomes known as
a fertile spot in the midst of an arid region. Simply put, green things grow
here despite adverse conditions. When students drop by our writing center
feeling lost in their thoughts, meandering hopelessly, lacking confidence
in their ability to create something lively and worth a readers time,
only to leave thirty minutes later with a sprout, something green and full
of possibility, then our center has accomplished something significant. Growth
in writing results, in part, from three essential tutoring activities: watering,
fertilizing, and pruning. When watering, the tutor provides a steady stream
of verbal and non-verbal support to encourage and motivate the visiting writer.
Fertilizing entails the tutor making suggestions for added nutrients that
would enhance the growth of a given piece. And pruning involves the thorny
work of the tutor offering advice on what to eliminateunnecessary branches
of discourse that may be twisted or broken, and therefore unfruitful. These
skillful activities have the potential to develop vital habits of thought
and practice for any nomad who desires to perform an amazing featmake
something grow in the desert.
Most
importantly, those who support a nomadic view of the writing center accept
the responsibility of guiding students, of showing them how to travel
hopefully. Hope emerges, for the traveling student writer, with the
knowledge that certain debilitating frames of mind and habits can be consciously
avoided, and other more healthy ones adopted. Clearly, tutors serve as vital
catalyzing agents in the process of promoting favorable writing behavior.
To promote hope and health within students as they write, staff members must
adopt an ethic, one that helps them recognize and challenge counterproductive
tendencies, one that directs their words and their actions. A nomadic writing
center ethic signifies an ought, a better way to think about and practice
writing. Such an ethic principally challenges two unhealthy motivations: complacency
and undeserved gratification.
More
than ever before, students feel pressured by subtle and overt forces, both
societal and personal, tempting them to want success without its substance.
Many succumb to just getting the paper done and then just
wanting the good grade; critically speaking, I describe this as the
drive to arrive, a tendency to desireeven demandthe results
of effective writing without the requisite process of travel. This attitude,
needless to say, militates against learning to write well and represents a
state of mind that the nomadic writing center attempts to change.
Based
upon his research on brain-compatible learning, published recently in the
Writing Lab Newsletter, James Upton discusses the need to help writers
move toward better states of mind, particularly while being tutored at the
writing center. Brain-compatible learning strategies, the attempt to
make formal school experiences reflect and utilize the brains natural
learning operations, Upton explains, are the true
keys to any meaningful educational change (11). Upton reminds us that
students bring emotions with them into writing center sessions, emotions reflecting
their current struggles: Writing center personnel are often in a reactive
mode to the actions and attitudes of others, and . . . we may find ourselves
with less than receptive writers who are angry, frustrated, belligerent, and/or
apathetic (11). To facilitate change within writers, moving them into
states of mind which are conducive to maximal learning, Upton provides several
ideas. Among them, he suggests that tutors debrief with a writer before a
session, help writers reduce unhealthy stress and fear, encourage writers
to make time for reflection during learning, and provide honest feedback in
a positive manner (11-12). Upton believes that these approaches, and others,
appropriated from brain research for instruction purposes, will create
a positive change in school structures and education practices (12).
Uptons
insights, besides being rooted in research, implicitly reveal ethical conviction:
they advocate better ways for tutors to influence writers which prove to be
in sync with a holistic understanding of the human body. Because these ways
promote elevated states of conscious learning, which have many long-term returns
for the writer, they are superior to less conscious learning behaviors. To
change the inferior drive to arrive state of mind and its negative
effects on writers, workers at a nomadic writing center try to implement ethically
oriented tutoring, like Uptons, to encourage writers to travel a better
route as they compose and learn. Gently and consistently, tutors remind writers
to see their work as an extension of themselves and to embrace the experience
of learning as they go through the various steps of writing. These positive
state changes, once accepted and embodied by students, facilitate
healthy composing behaviors and enrich the writing experience.
The notion of tutors becoming state change facilitators in the writing center may, to some in our success-crazed culture, seem radical . . . and it is. But for the writer who adopts these sorts of attitude alterations, with the tutors help, true success in writing will no longer simply be measured by the end product alone or the final grade it receives, but also by the quality of the labor put forth to produce a paper. Appropriately, then, the process of writing itself becomes worthwhile, and the knowledge from writing satisfying. When the writer rejects the drive to arrive and adopts the will to travel, writing can become liberating, transforming, even exciting. The nomadic writing center empowers student writers to value and pursue travel benefits such as these, and ultimately, to discover, in the words of Robert Louis Stevenson, a better thing than to arrive.
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